I know there is some language misstakes in this one but I don't have the energy to fix it ( Read more... )

This is a short story I wrote for writing class in school. It was originally written in swedish, I have done an translation/interpretation of it for fun. I would be forever grateful if someone read it and made a comment. That is my new rule, you must comment if you read any of my poems or short stories. Not my personal rabble but the writing I ( Read more... )